Under the water

 Title Under the water.There was a little boy named Jack he likes swimming but his parents said it was too dangerous for them at this time. Then a few months later Jack was turning ten he wanted to go to the pools. Then he got changed and his family went to the pool.Then Jack saw a sign at the pool that said there was a competition at the pool. Then Jack asked his mum and dad they said yes ok they said and then they went to watch Jack swim in the race. Then the race started and they had to swim to the end of the pool and touch the wall and then come back and touch the lifeguard's hand and Jack won. Then a few 20 years go by and Jack has his one house and own family and his one car and he had a competition and he went with his family and he got ready then he went to the start of the race with the older people then he started the race he swam all the and then back he Jack won and then he went home happily. With his family.Task Description:Today I am making my own storey it is called under the water did you the boy name is called Jack he likes swimming and he won lots of competition.