On the edge of the world

 Once upon a time there was a family that loved animals but except a boy named John. He didn't like animals but he had a puppy. 

when he turned four but he loved the puppy and he thanks mum and dad. But when he turned five his puppy turned five two because he was born at the same time. And when he turned six his puppy bit his leg and then John started to cry and his parents said what happened and John said the puppy bit me on the leg. Then John’s parents put the puppy outside and said to her bad puppy. Then after that his parents took him to the doctors. Next John went home from the doctor’s and then he went to bed and when he got into bed he heard a noise and he tried to go to bed but he kept on hearing that noise so he went to his mum and dad room and he asked his mum and dad and his mum and his dad said yes. Then John wolk up and his parents and his sister Amber went to the shop. And then he was looking for his toy then he found it outside where his dog was but it was asleep so he was walking so slow because his dog didn't know he was there. And then he took his toy inside and then he went to see the stars and then he saw a big giraffe and it was giant and then John was feeding it with grass. And then his family came back home.?His mum knew it would work and then John was scared of animals anymore. And Then he became friend’s with all the animals.